Response
After our group pitch we received feedback on how we can improve out idea. The feedback told us that the audience thought that our film opening sounded too confusing and the idea of having flashbacks in the 2 minute opening was too much and would confuse those watching it. Another comment was that they were unsure what would be chasing the main character, not sure if it was human or some monster type of thing saying that the idea was now even more confusing and that it would be difficult to film without confusing the audience.
Improvements
Since the group pitch we have decided as a group to change our plot idea to a psychological thriller that makes more sense and is less confusing than the idea before, we simplified the plot so that it was easier to film and easier for the audience to understand. we removed the idea of having something stalk the main character
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