Group Pitch- Audience feedback

From the group pitch we presented to the rest of the class, we received  good feedback in which we can take onboard into improving our opening idea. It was mentioned to us that our thriller opening came off as a bit confusing to the audience in terms of the concept of the plot. By hearing this we can improve by generating a storyboard of our intended plot so that it may be clearer to the audience and to ourselves on whats going to happen in the opening because by making a storyboard we can discuss various camera shots to use that would best portray the situation and a way so that its clear to the audience whats happening. Another concern that was pointed out to us was the concept of the monster that we were going to use and how we were going to represent it. After discussing it with the group we've decided that instead of trying to use ways of showing the monster, we were thinking of portraying the monster through the use of sounds and generate our own monster noise to use in the opening  where we feel that the protagonist would come across it. We were complimented on our idea of the soundtrack being simplistic and tension making. We're going to keep the soundtrack because we feel that it would do a great job at creating suspense for the audience, its simplistic and in a tribal rhythm which mimics the main characters sense of alert and panic.